http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts Deconstructing the PT One Scene At A Time... Tue, 09 Sep 2008 23:46:33 +0000 http://backend.userland.com/rss092 en Same rules apply: this was cobbled together from a late draft and the ROTS DVD, with gaps filled in by me as necessary. The chapter numbering does not match the chapters on the DVD, and no deleted scenes will be covered. EXT. SPACE TITLE CARD: A long time ago in a galaxy ... http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=133 The newest version of Wordpress fixed a registration bug that can be exploited by unscrupulous folk. This seems to be the latest in a long line of such bugs, so I'm going to turn off open registration. It won't affect people who already registered, just that there won't be new ... http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=171 DVD...check. Text Edit open...check. Logged in Wordpress as Admin...check. The LucasClub™ of Idiocy Mark IX...check. Pepper spray for the screaming fangirls in the front row...check. Motion tracker to detect presence of the LucasClub™ of Subtle Storytelling...check. Barf bags...check. Sarcasm-O-Matic™, fixed...check. Throat lozenges (for screaming at the screen)...check. Bandages (for my forehead bruised from banging it on the keyboard in ... http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=131 :evil: http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=128 Okay, now I'm bored and I need something to get exercised about. I won't see Indy 4 until it's on DVD (not because I don't think I'll like it), so not much to rag on there. Except whenever Lucas gives an interview at a movie premiere. :pfft: Anyway, I've cracked open ... http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=127 It's April and still no shredding of ROTS? What gives? Mostly laziness and not wanting to slog through the script so soon after AOTC. I think this one deviates from its last draft more than the others. For instance, in the draft the opening scene was much longer and had ... http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=126 EXT: SPACE - CORUSCANT Count Dooku's sailship approaches Coruscant's night side. As the ship descends, the sails collapse and retract. I don't know why, but for some reason I feel the sail should be behind the ship. Weird. :? EXT: CORUSCANT, OLD TOWN - DAWN Dooku's ship glides past glittering towers and industrial ... http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=124 INT: GEONOSIS, SECRET HANGAR - LATE DAY Count Dooku increases the tempo of his attack. Obi-Wan is pushed to the limit to defend himself. Dooku presses. The two lock sabers. Obi-Wan strains to push Dooku's blade away. Dooku grins and flashes his blade, quickly wounding Obi-Wan in the shoulder, then the ... http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=123 ...which I'll be doing here. All to get past the rest of this CGI orgy pointless battle between faceless clones and faceless droids (oh joy), and faceless Jedi who are really no more effective than missiles and blasters. We do find out that termites designed the Death Star, though. Guh. ... http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=122 Well, for one, I'm back into my own writing and moving old stuff into new software. Second, I'm still running to the hospital for dressing changes, and the pain loves to interfere with what I'm doing, so sometimes I'd rather take pain pills and go to bed than endure it. ... http://www.darthsheba.com/ptscripts/?p=121